一篇經過“斧正”英語短文
剛才去一個英語學習論壇，看到nephewliang網友用英文寫了一篇短文，大意是介紹他所在的辦公室，然后請求其他網友斧正。果然沒過多久，wing1978網友來了，舉起大斧，給這篇短文正了正（笑）。我個人認為，這篇短文很有代表性，其中出現的一些錯誤，是國內英語初學者經常犯的，所以下面我想把這篇短文中有明顯錯誤的一組句子挑出來，請各位看看原文是怎樣寫的（第一行），斧手又是怎樣正的（第二行）。為便于初學者理解，我對文字做了適當的修改和簡化，因此下面的內容與帖子的內容略有出入。
①When entering into the office，you can find everything is kept in good order.
②Stepping into the office，you will find everything is in good order.
③進入辦公室，可以發現一切都井井有條。
①The file keepers on the left are put of data in classified way.
②The file cabinets on the left are used to store classified data.
③左邊的文件柜用來存放分類文件。
①The white bookcases on the right are full of instruction and manual of different kinds.
②The white bookcases on the right are full of manuals of various kinds.
③右邊的白色書柜裝滿了各種各樣的手冊。
①The ivory-white desks，decorated with bonsais，are shining in the lighting.
②The ivory-white desks，decorated with bonsais，shine under the lights.
③裝飾著盆景的乳白色辦公桌閃閃發光。
①Two air-conditioners are installed respectively near the front door and the back door.
②Two air-conditioners are installed respectively near the front and back doors.
③兩臺空調分別安裝在前門和后門。
①The engineering office provides a good place to the engineers of the engineering department.
②The office provides a good place for the members of the engineering department.
③這個辦公室為工程部的工作人員提供了一個良好的辦公場所。
①Because of no stable working place，they worked only in the workshops.
②The lack of office space forced them to work only in the workshops.
③辦公室空間的狹小迫使他們只能在車間中工作。
①It was difficult to get together to have a meeting or to make discussion for all.
②It was difficult to get together to have a meeting or discussion.
③大家很難湊在一起開會或討論。
剛才去一個英語學習論壇，看到nephewliang網友用英文寫了一篇短文，大意是介紹他所在的辦公室，然后請求其他網友斧正。果然沒過多久，wing1978網友來了，舉起大斧，給這篇短文正了正（笑）。我個人認為，這篇短文很有代表性，其中出現的一些錯誤，是國內英語初學者經常犯的，所以下面我想把這篇短文中有明顯錯誤的一組句子挑出來，請各位看看原文是怎樣寫的（第一行），斧手又是怎樣正的（第二行）。為便于初學者理解，我對文字做了適當的修改和簡化，因此下面的內容與帖子的內容略有出入。
①When entering into the office，you can find everything is kept in good order.
②Stepping into the office，you will find everything is in good order.
③進入辦公室，可以發現一切都井井有條。
①The file keepers on the left are put of data in classified way.
②The file cabinets on the left are used to store classified data.
③左邊的文件柜用來存放分類文件。
①The white bookcases on the right are full of instruction and manual of different kinds.
②The white bookcases on the right are full of manuals of various kinds.
③右邊的白色書柜裝滿了各種各樣的手冊。
①The ivory-white desks，decorated with bonsais，are shining in the lighting.
②The ivory-white desks，decorated with bonsais，shine under the lights.
③裝飾著盆景的乳白色辦公桌閃閃發光。
①Two air-conditioners are installed respectively near the front door and the back door.
②Two air-conditioners are installed respectively near the front and back doors.
③兩臺空調分別安裝在前門和后門。
①The engineering office provides a good place to the engineers of the engineering department.
②The office provides a good place for the members of the engineering department.
③這個辦公室為工程部的工作人員提供了一個良好的辦公場所。
①Because of no stable working place，they worked only in the workshops.
②The lack of office space forced them to work only in the workshops.
③辦公室空間的狹小迫使他們只能在車間中工作。
①It was difficult to get together to have a meeting or to make discussion for all.
②It was difficult to get together to have a meeting or discussion.
③大家很難湊在一起開會或討論。
