I am deeply grateful to you for your prompt attention to my letter of application. I wish to apply for the position of Sales and Marketing supervisor in your company which you advertised in www. Zhaopin.com. Enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my relevant information.

　　I am convinced that I am competent at this job. There are three reasons as follow. The first and foremost, I have a degree in Marking, and used to be the minister of propaganda of the students association. Secondly, I have two years of work experience about this position. Last but not least, I not only possess the capacity of excellent interpersonal communication skill and document writing, but also have the spirit of teamwork and enthusiasm about working for the firm.

　　So, I would express my appreciation if you could grant me an interview. I believe that you will not be disappointed to give me this opportunity. Look forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, I am deeply grateful to you for your prompt attention to my letter of application(application letter). I wish to apply for the position of Sales and Marketing supervisor(首字母全部小寫就可以了)in your company which you advertised in www. Zhaopin.com. Enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my relevant information. I am convinced that I am competent at this job. There are three reasons as follow. The first and foremost, I have a degree in Marking, and used to be the minister of propaganda of the students association. Secondly, I have two years of work experience about this position. Last but not least, I not only possess the capacity of excellent interpersonal communication skill and document writing, but also have the spirit of teamwork and enthusiasm about working for the firm. So, I would express my appreciation if you could grant me an interview. I believe that you will not be disappointed to give me this opportunity. Look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming(這一部分要寫在右下角) 點評：7-8分

　　寫的很不錯，個別的表達需要簡化，加油，爭取寫出滿分作文。

　　I am deeply grateful to you for your prompt attention to my letter of application. I wish to apply for the position of Sales and Marketing supervisor in your company which you advertised in www. Zhaopin.com. Enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my relevant information.

　　I am convinced that I am competent at this job. There are three reasons as follow. The first and foremost, I have a degree in Marking, and used to be the minister of propaganda of the students association. Secondly, I have two years of work experience about this position. Last but not least, I not only possess the capacity of excellent interpersonal communication skill and document writing, but also have the spirit of teamwork and enthusiasm about working for the firm.

　　So, I would express my appreciation if you could grant me an interview. I believe that you will not be disappointed to give me this opportunity. Look forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, I am deeply grateful to you for your prompt attention to my letter of application(application letter). I wish to apply for the position of Sales and Marketing supervisor(首字母全部小寫就可以了)in your company which you advertised in www. Zhaopin.com. Enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my relevant information. I am convinced that I am competent at this job. There are three reasons as follow. The first and foremost, I have a degree in Marking, and used to be the minister of propaganda of the students association. Secondly, I have two years of work experience about this position. Last but not least, I not only possess the capacity of excellent interpersonal communication skill and document writing, but also have the spirit of teamwork and enthusiasm about working for the firm. So, I would express my appreciation if you could grant me an interview. I believe that you will not be disappointed to give me this opportunity. Look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Ming(這一部分要寫在右下角) 點評：7-8分

　　寫的很不錯，個別的表達需要簡化，加油，爭取寫出滿分作文。