專題十七 短文改錯(cuò)

　　2024～2011年各省市高考題

　　Passage 1　(2024·新課標(biāo)全國(guó))

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　只允許修改10處多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

　　I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it.

　　答案　

　　to live in the city.I

　　I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in

　　countryside.There the air is clean

　　the mountains are green.Unfortunately， the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have

　　shown that global warming has already become a very

　　problem.The

　　we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are dying out.We must

　　ways to protect

　　environment.If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it.

　　1.解析　考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)前面一句可知這是發(fā)生在小時(shí)候的事情故用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。

　　答案　第2句think→thought

　　2.解析　考查冠詞的用法。in the countryside (在鄉(xiāng)村)為固定短語。

　　答案　第3句：countryside前加the

　　解析　考查并列詞的用法。那兒的空氣潔凈群山蔥綠。由句意可知兩個(gè)分句之間顯然為并列關(guān)系而非選擇關(guān)系。

　　答案　第4句：or→and

　　解析　考查介詞的用法。with the development of...為一固定短語意思是“隨著……的發(fā)展”。

　　答案　第5句：on→with

　　解析　考查被動(dòng)語態(tài)的用法。眾多研究表明全球變暖已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)十分嚴(yán)重的問題。由句意可知和謂語show之間為主動(dòng)關(guān)系故要用主動(dòng)語態(tài)。

　　答案　第6句：去掉been

　　解析　考查形容詞的用法。修飾名詞problem應(yīng)當(dāng)用形容詞。

　　答案　第6句：seriously→serious

　　解析　考查不可數(shù)名詞的用法。air作“空氣”講時(shí)為不可數(shù)名詞。

　　答案　第7句：airs→air

　　解析　考查代詞的用法。Animals為可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)故many。

　　答案　第8句：Much→Many

　　解析　考查情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的用法。情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后面要接動(dòng)詞原形。

　　答案　第9句：found→find

　　解析　考查語境中代詞的用法。依據(jù)前后句的語境及邏輯關(guān)系可知your與上下文相悖結(jié)合句意應(yīng)當(dāng)改為our/the才能使句意通順。

　　答案　第9句：your→our

　　Passage 2　(2024·新課標(biāo)全國(guó))

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅

　　2.只允許修改10處多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

　　ks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

　　答案　

　　.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy

　　a shop window.He liked it so

　　much that he quickly walked into the shop.After

　　at the toy for some time，he turned around and found

　　his parents were missing.Tony was scared and

　　to cry.A woman saw him crying and

　　him to wait outside

　　shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw

　　parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were

　　1.解析　考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。由第五句中的“his parents were missing.”可知此處應(yīng)當(dāng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

　　答案　第1句：parent→parents

　　解析　考查介詞的用法。玩具是擺放在商店的櫥窗里面的in。

　　答案　第3句： on→in

　　解析　考查固定句型的用法。由語境可知托尼非常喜歡這個(gè)玩具于是快速走進(jìn)商店。so...that...為固定句型意思是“如此……以致于……”故去掉very。

　　答案　第4句： 去掉very

　　解析　考查省略的用法。After之后省去了主語he與look at之間為邏輯上的主謂關(guān)

　　答案　第5句： looks→looking

　　解析　考查賓語從句連接詞的用法。動(dòng)詞found之后為賓語從句從句為系表結(jié)構(gòu)意思完整故將where去掉或改為沒有詞義且不作成分的that。

　　答案　第5句： 去掉where或where→that

　　解析　考查并列謂語的用法。由句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知與was scared并列因此要用一般過去時(shí)。

　　答案　第6句：begun→began

　　解析　考查并列謂語的用法。有一位婦女看到他哭泣就告訴他去商店外面等。由句意可知這一動(dòng)作是這個(gè)婦女發(fā)出的應(yīng)當(dāng)與saw構(gòu)成并列謂語。故改用told。

　　答案　第7句：telling→told

　　解析　考查冠詞的用法。表示談話雙方共知的名詞前要用定

　　答案　第7句：a→the

　　解析　考查物主代詞的用法。根據(jù)句意及英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)在parents前加上與主語相一致的物主代詞。

　　答案　第8句：saw后加his

　　解析　考查副詞的用法。形容詞worried之前要用副詞來修飾。

　　答案　第10句：terrible→terribly

　　Passage 3　(2024·四川)

　　下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧)并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：

　　每句不超過兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤；

　　每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一次；

　　只允許修改10處多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

　　Hi,

　　It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

　　As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?

　　Please help with me and give me some advice.

　　Grace

　　答案　

　　It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really

　　want ∧to share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

　　As I

　　you last time, I made three new

　　here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time

　　in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me .And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. do you think I should do? If you

　　me，would you talk to ？

　　me and give me some advice.

　　Grace

　　1.解析　考查動(dòng)詞want的用法后用不定式作狀語故加上to。

　　答案　want后加to

　　解析　考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語last timetell改成told。句意：正如我上次告訴你的那樣。

　　答案　tell→told

　　解析　考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。名詞friend為可數(shù)名詞其前有three修飾需要用復(fù)數(shù)形式故把friend改成friends。句意：我在這兒交了三個(gè)新朋友。

　　答案　friend→friends

　　解析　考查動(dòng)名詞作賓spend...(in)doing sth結(jié)構(gòu)故把sing改成singing。

　　答案　sing→singing

　　解析　考查代詞。根據(jù)句意指的是花費(fèi)很多錢故用much而非many。句意：那真的花費(fèi)很多。

　　答案　many→much

　　解析　考查連詞。上一分句句意：我不想再去；下一分句句意：我怕失去他們的友so改成but。

　　答案　so→but

　　解析　考查疑問詞的選擇。本句中do之后缺少賓語故用what。

　　答案　How→What

　　解析　考查虛擬語氣。根據(jù)句意可知此處為虛擬語氣與現(xiàn)在事實(shí)不符故把a(bǔ)re改成were。句意：如果你是我。

　　答案　are→were

　　解析　考查代詞。根據(jù)上文可知作者交了三個(gè)朋友故用them。句意：你會(huì)和他們說嗎？

　　答案　him→them

　　解析　考查動(dòng)詞。動(dòng)詞help為及物動(dòng)詞其后接賓語時(shí)無需加介詞故去掉with。句意：請(qǐng)幫幫我給我一些建議。

　　答案　去掉with

　　Passage 4　(2024·陜西)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧)并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線(

　　)并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

　　只允許修改10處多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

　　ecide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

　　At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

　　My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

　　答案　

　　last week.I wanted to do

　　special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the

　　biscuits in the world，so I

　　to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic

　　of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really .My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor

　　I was packing them up.

　　At

　　party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just

　　get some more of these biscuits.”

　　My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me

　　the biscuits with happy laughter!

　　1.解析　last week上個(gè)星期前面無需加冠詞。

　　答案　去掉in

　　解析　something用在肯定句中表示“一些事”任何事”。

　　答案　anything→something

　　解析　我的媽媽做了世界上最好吃的餅干此處不是比較含義應(yīng)是最高級(jí)(best)。

　　答案　better→best

　　解析　全文的時(shí)態(tài)都是一般過去時(shí)故把decide改為decided。

　　答案　decide→decided

　　解析　根據(jù)前面的some應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)形式。

　　答案　step→steps

　　解析　作表語的是形容詞good是副詞作狀語。

　　答案　well→good

　　解析　我唯一所犯的錯(cuò)誤就是當(dāng)我包裝餅干的時(shí)候掉在地上一些。when/while當(dāng)……的時(shí)候在……之后。

　　答案　after→when/while

　　解析　此處表特指在晚會(huì)上。

　　答案　a→the

　　解析　動(dòng)詞不定式表示目的我也許得再退休一次能吃到更多的餅干。

　　答案　just后加to

　　解析　and連接兩個(gè)并列的(動(dòng))名詞enjoying。

　　答案　enjoy→enjoying

　　Passage 5　(2024·浙江)

　　下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤

　　2.只允許修改10處多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

　?。環(huán)and side of the class full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.

　　1.解析　考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。前面有three修飾故要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

　　答案　第一句：side→sides

　　解析　考查固定表達(dá)。be made of是指不經(jīng)過加工能直接看出原材料；be made from是指經(jīng)過加工不能直接看出原料。

　　答案　第一句：from→of

　　解析　考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。動(dòng)詞enjoy后要接動(dòng)名詞作賓語。

　　答案　第二句：sit→sitting

　　解析　考查形容詞和副詞的錯(cuò)用。修飾動(dòng)詞see要有副詞形式。

　　答案　第三句：easy→easily

　　解析　考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。本文描述的是作者原來的舊教室故要時(shí)態(tài)保持一致用一般過去時(shí)。

　　答案　第五句：is→was

　　解析　考查代詞的錯(cuò)用。代替前面的單數(shù)a beautiful park要用it。

　　答案　第六句：them→it

　　解析　考查邏輯關(guān)系。在更遠(yuǎn)處我可以欣賞雪山的美景。

　　答案　第七句：not去掉

　　解析　考查固定表達(dá)。in a hurry匆匆忙忙。

　　答案　第九句：in后加a

　　解析　考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。make sb do...使某人做某事。

　　答案　第十句：felt→feel

　　解析　考查狀語從句引導(dǎo)詞。盡管在那座教室學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)我是唯一的一個(gè)孩子但我將永遠(yuǎn)忘不了它。