寫作訓練(二)

　　(2024·黑龍江省哈師大附中高三第三次月考)

　　假設你是李華，幾天前你從某國外網站購買一支錄音筆，現在你發電子郵件到該網站反應以下問題：

　　1．音質不太清楚；2.操作不簡便：3.經常出問題。

　　期待的解決辦法：1.退貨退款；2.修理或調換。

　　注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭和結束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

　　2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3．參考詞匯：錄音筆 recording pen。

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

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　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　答案：

　　寫作訓練(二)

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　I’m writing to tell you something about the recording pen I bought from your website several days ago. There seems to be something wrong with it. First，the voice isn’t so clear as you claimed. Second，it’s not easy to operate，which caused me much trouble. Third，it often breaks down，while a recording pen at such a price shouldn’t have had so many problems.

　　Due to its poor quality and much inconvenience it has caused，I wonder whether you can do something about it. I would appreciate it very much if I can get my money back and I’ll send it back to you as soon as you return the money to me. If it can’t be helped，I wish you could have it repaired or changed.

　　I’m looking forward to your early reply.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　寫作訓練(二)

　　(2024·黑龍江省哈師大附中高三第三次月考)

　　假設你是李華，幾天前你從某國外網站購買一支錄音筆，現在你發電子郵件到該網站反應以下問題：

　　1．音質不太清楚；2.操作不簡便：3.經常出問題。

　　期待的解決辦法：1.退貨退款；2.修理或調換。

　　注意：1.詞數100左右，開頭和結束語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

　　2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3．參考詞匯：錄音筆 recording pen。

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　答案：

　　寫作訓練(二)

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　I’m writing to tell you something about the recording pen I bought from your website several days ago. There seems to be something wrong with it. First，the voice isn’t so clear as you claimed. Second，it’s not easy to operate，which caused me much trouble. Third，it often breaks down，while a recording pen at such a price shouldn’t have had so many problems.

　　Due to its poor quality and much inconvenience it has caused，I wonder whether you can do something about it. I would appreciate it very much if I can get my money back and I’ll send it back to you as soon as you return the money to me. If it can’t be helped，I wish you could have it repaired or changed.

　　I’m looking forward to your early reply.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua