鄭州市 2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（1）附參考范文
鄭州市 2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（1）附參考范文
?。ㄈ珖抡n標卷）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a
buying
ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to
there
Xiamen for∧ long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag
A
and
Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my
money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very
in
were
strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to
luggage
friend’s
me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
felt
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(2024湖北荊門鐘祥一中五月適應)
請你根據以下提示，結合生活中的一個事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
In your school life，maybe there's a certain teacher who you will never forget.Tell us the reasons why he or she makes you unforgettable.
注意：①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；
?、诔姼柰?，文體不限；
?、畚闹胁坏猛嘎秱€人姓名和學校名稱；
④詞數為120左右。
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參考答案
One possible version：
In my school life，I have met many people who are really worth my recalling.But perhaps the most unforgettable person is my math teacher.
She was really open-minded and funny.Not only did she help us in class but also after class.I still remember one time I got a “B” in the final exam.I liked math best and the teacher took pride in me all the time，however，I failed.I felt so frustrated that I lost my energy and confidence.Then one day，I happened to meet her in the street，my face turned red right away.To my surprise，she patted me on the shoulder with a smile，asked me not to give up and even encouraged me to work harder.Later，she offered me a great many suggestions on learning math.In addition，she gave me every chance to show my thought about all kinds of problems，with whose help，I made great progress.
短文改錯
Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public elementary school or the private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software and begin programming computers at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would be a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be success in the IT field.
參考答案：
Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public on elementary school or the private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software and begin and where began programming computers at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior his year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would developing guided be a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be ∧success in the IT field. valuea
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高考英語作文精選范文（看圖作文類）
***、下列圖表反映的是我校2002年與2005年學生健康狀況調查的部分數據。請你用英文為某報寫一份報告，反映該校三年間學生健康狀況的變化情況，分析其原因并提出相應的改進措施（不少于兩條）。
注意：1．報告必須包括圖表中所有內容。
2．詞數：120左右。第一句已給出（不計入總詞數）。
A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years . The number of nearsighted students has increased from 78.2% in 2002 to 92.5% in 2005 , and that of overweight , from 36% to 52.4%. Compared to 2002 nearly 10% more students lack sleep because of more homework to do . Besides , over 15% more students has become mentally unhealthy .
To improve students’ health , we call for less homework . Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent them from getting nearsighted . Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they won’t easily put on weight . With their heavy burdens removed , students can then be mentally healthy.
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高考英語書面表達講義：教育校園話題作文
例4：目前，有不少中學生不做家務，一些父母認為：中學生學習負擔重，首要任務是學習。再者，中學生也不知道怎樣做家務。請你就此用英文給一家報社寫一篇短文，闡述你的觀點和看法。
注意：
1. 詞數：100左右;
2. 可根據內容要點適當增加細節，使行文連貫。
Nowadays, some students don't help their parents do housework at home.
Some parents love their children too much and don't let them work at home. On one hand, they think that their children are too busy with their studies and expect them to do well in their lessons only. On the other hand, they think their children don't know how to do the housework.
However, I think students should help their parents do housework at home. First, that can develop their love for work. Next, that can help them understand their parents better. Last and the most important, that can help them cultivate their ability to live.
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高考英語書面表達指導
寫作中的常用句型
以下是寫作中使用率最高、覆蓋面最廣的基本句式,每組句式的功能相同或相似,考生可根據自己的情況選擇其中的1~2個,作到能夠熟練正確地仿寫或套用。
1.表示原因
1）There are three reasons for this.
2）The reasons for this are as follows.
3）The reason for this is obvious.
4）The reason for this is not far to seek.
5）The reason for this is that...
6）We have good reason to believe that...
例如:
There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
注:如考生寫第一個句子沒有把握,可將其改寫成兩個句子。例如:Great changes have taken place in our life.There are three reasons for this.這樣寫可以避免套用中的表達失誤。
2.表示好處
1）It has the following advantages.
2）It does us a lot of good.
3）It benefits us quite a lot.
4）It is beneficial to us.
5）It is of great benefit to us.
例如:
Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
3.表示壞處
1）It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2）It does us much harm.
3）It is harmful to us.
例如:
However,everything divides into two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.
4.表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能
1）It is important（necessary,difficult,convenient,possible）for sb.to do sth.
2）We think it necessary to do sth.
3）It plays an important role in our life.
例如:
Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon,computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
5.表示措施
1）We should take some effective measures.
2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties.
3）We should do our utmost in doing sth.
4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with.
例如:
The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.
6.表示變化
1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years.
2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications.
3）The computer has brought about many changes in education.
例如:
Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.
7.表示事實、現狀
1）We cannot ignore the fact that...
2）No one can deny the fact that...
3）There is no denying the fact that...
4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.
5）However,that’s not the case.
例如:
We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems,we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.
8.表示比較
1）Compared with A,B...
2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV.
3）There is a striking contrast between them.
例如:
Compared with cars,bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly,they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly,they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least,they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise.
9.表示數量
1）It has increased（decreased）from...to...
2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800 000.
3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15％ compared with that of January
例如:
With the improvement of the living standard,the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.
再如:
From the graph listed above,it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 2000.
10.表示看法
1）People have（take,adopt,assume）different attitudes towards sth.
2）People have different opinions on this problem.
3）People take different views of（on）the question.
4）Some people believe that...Others argue that...
例如:
People have different attitudes towards failure.Some believe that failure leads to success.Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor.However,others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.
再如:
Do “lucky numbersreally bring good luck？Different people have different views on it.
注:一個段落有時很適宜以問句開始,考生應掌握這一寫作方法。
11.表示結論
1）In short,it can be said that...
2）It may be briefly summed up as follows.
3）From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that...
例如:
From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary,however,its method should be improved.
注:例句1可用于任何一個段落的結論句;例句3則多用文章結論段的第一句。
12.套語
1）It’s well known to us that...
2）As is known to us,...
3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about.
4）From the graph（table,chart）listed above,it can be seen that...
5）As a proverb says,“Where there is a will,there is a way.”
例如:
As is well known to us,it is important for the students to know the world outside campus.
The reason for this is obvious.Nowadays,the society is changing and developing rapidly,and the campus is no longer an “ivory tower”.
As college students,we must get in touch with the world outside the campus.Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduate.
再如:
Does it pay to be honest？This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.
第一節 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，共10分）
