2010年10月SAT考試真題之寫作范文 （范文二）

　　注：本片文章是請(qǐng)?zhí)K州學(xué)員（Yanzi Wu）同學(xué)在考試之后即刻回憶的原創(chuàng)考試作文。

　　這位同學(xué)的思路清晰，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，選取的觀點(diǎn)同大部分同學(xué)不一樣。覺得我們應(yīng)該堅(jiān)持自己的態(tài)度。

　　開頭段

　　1 觀點(diǎn)While it is reasonably natural to think that adaptation makes people more flexible and easier to fit into a new environment, sometimes staying unchanged may help us achieve a goal of life. 　　

　　2 解釋原因 In some cases, it is better to stick to ones original goal and hold on.

　　不改變態(tài)度，堅(jiān)持自己的目標(biāo)，更有可以完成自己的理想。 　　

　　3 結(jié)構(gòu)提示 The example of Rachel Carson well illustrates my point. 　　

　　中間段

　　提示：這位同學(xué)介紹的主人公Rachel Carson是美國(guó)生物學(xué)家和科學(xué)讀物作家，1962年發(fā)表預(yù)言性著作《寂靜的春天》，提醒世界注意農(nóng)藥在食物鏈中所起的破壞作用，被認(rèn)為是環(huán)保運(yùn)動(dòng)史上有重大影響的著作。 　　

　　這個(gè)人物的素材是她自己之前就準(zhǔn)備過的，十分新穎。同時(shí)對(duì)于考官來說，一位美國(guó)作家的故事無疑較為親切。 　　

　　例子的題眼是：新環(huán)境（政府部門）堅(jiān)持自己的態(tài)度（要致力于保護(hù)環(huán)境，而不是適應(yīng)政府部門生活）成功 　　

　　Carsons mother was a naturalist herself and bequeathed to little Carson a life-long love of nature and the living creatures. Carson was deeply influenced by her mother and was determined to dedicate her life to the cause of studying and protecting the natural world. （營(yíng)造出主人公的人生態(tài)度，人生理想） 　　

　　After graduating from Johns Hopkins University, Carson was somehow hired by the U.S Bureau of Fisheries and mostly wrote radio scripts for the government. For the next 15 years, she stayed in federal service and worked as a government official. Most people might think of Carson as a typical government official. But unlike most of her fellow officials, who were in fanatic pursuit of high places and positions, Carson never abandoned her childhood goal----to tell people about the beauty of nature. Instead of changing and adapting herself to the typical government environment, she remained the old Carson and never changed herself.（重要點(diǎn)題，即使是在介紹） 　　

　　During her spare time, she turned her analytical and statistical data into lyric prose: first as an article Undersea,and then a bookUnder the sea-wind.In 1952,she published her prize-winning book The sea around us.At that point of her life, she made up her mind to resign from government service and devote herself to writing.（沒有去適應(yīng)所謂的新環(huán)境，而是堅(jiān)持理想，并且去創(chuàng)造一個(gè)更適合自己的環(huán)境） 　　

　　She published numerous books later on in life, most of which had a tremendous influence on how people viewed the world around them. In her writings, Carson led the world to appreciate the beauty and integrity of nature ,rendering people realize that human is only a vulnerable part of the fragile environment, and that the only power human had is the one to alter the world, sometimes in an irreversible way. Through her writings, Rachel Carson made invaluable contributions, inspiring generations of people to relish and protect the natural world.（點(diǎn)出主人公的成就） 　　

　　總結(jié)

　　1） 總結(jié)例子

　　If Rachel Carson had changed her mind halfway and adapted herself to be a normal government official, she would not have achieved and contributed much as a naturalist, writer and scientist.

　　2）重述觀點(diǎn)

　　It is exactly her strong will to remain unchanged and make her dream come true that finally raises the awareness of the public about the significance of environmental protection.

　　2010年10月SAT考試真題之寫作范文 （范文二）

　　注：本片文章是請(qǐng)?zhí)K州學(xué)員（Yanzi Wu）同學(xué)在考試之后即刻回憶的原創(chuàng)考試作文。

　　這位同學(xué)的思路清晰，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，選取的觀點(diǎn)同大部分同學(xué)不一樣。覺得我們應(yīng)該堅(jiān)持自己的態(tài)度。

　　開頭段

　　1 觀點(diǎn)While it is reasonably natural to think that adaptation makes people more flexible and easier to fit into a new environment, sometimes staying unchanged may help us achieve a goal of life. 　　

　　2 解釋原因 In some cases, it is better to stick to ones original goal and hold on.

　　不改變態(tài)度，堅(jiān)持自己的目標(biāo)，更有可以完成自己的理想。 　　

　　3 結(jié)構(gòu)提示 The example of Rachel Carson well illustrates my point. 　　

　　中間段

　　提示：這位同學(xué)介紹的主人公Rachel Carson是美國(guó)生物學(xué)家和科學(xué)讀物作家，1962年發(fā)表預(yù)言性著作《寂靜的春天》，提醒世界注意農(nóng)藥在食物鏈中所起的破壞作用，被認(rèn)為是環(huán)保運(yùn)動(dòng)史上有重大影響的著作。 　　

　　這個(gè)人物的素材是她自己之前就準(zhǔn)備過的，十分新穎。同時(shí)對(duì)于考官來說，一位美國(guó)作家的故事無疑較為親切。 　　

　　例子的題眼是：新環(huán)境（政府部門）堅(jiān)持自己的態(tài)度（要致力于保護(hù)環(huán)境，而不是適應(yīng)政府部門生活）成功 　　

　　Carsons mother was a naturalist herself and bequeathed to little Carson a life-long love of nature and the living creatures. Carson was deeply influenced by her mother and was determined to dedicate her life to the cause of studying and protecting the natural world. （營(yíng)造出主人公的人生態(tài)度，人生理想） 　　

　　After graduating from Johns Hopkins University, Carson was somehow hired by the U.S Bureau of Fisheries and mostly wrote radio scripts for the government. For the next 15 years, she stayed in federal service and worked as a government official. Most people might think of Carson as a typical government official. But unlike most of her fellow officials, who were in fanatic pursuit of high places and positions, Carson never abandoned her childhood goal----to tell people about the beauty of nature. Instead of changing and adapting herself to the typical government environment, she remained the old Carson and never changed herself.（重要點(diǎn)題，即使是在介紹） 　　

　　During her spare time, she turned her analytical and statistical data into lyric prose: first as an article Undersea,and then a bookUnder the sea-wind.In 1952,she published her prize-winning book The sea around us.At that point of her life, she made up her mind to resign from government service and devote herself to writing.（沒有去適應(yīng)所謂的新環(huán)境，而是堅(jiān)持理想，并且去創(chuàng)造一個(gè)更適合自己的環(huán)境） 　　

　　She published numerous books later on in life, most of which had a tremendous influence on how people viewed the world around them. In her writings, Carson led the world to appreciate the beauty and integrity of nature ,rendering people realize that human is only a vulnerable part of the fragile environment, and that the only power human had is the one to alter the world, sometimes in an irreversible way. Through her writings, Rachel Carson made invaluable contributions, inspiring generations of people to relish and protect the natural world.（點(diǎn)出主人公的成就） 　　

　　總結(jié)

　　1） 總結(jié)例子

　　If Rachel Carson had changed her mind halfway and adapted herself to be a normal government official, she would not have achieved and contributed much as a naturalist, writer and scientist.

　　2）重述觀點(diǎn)

　　It is exactly her strong will to remain unchanged and make her dream come true that finally raises the awareness of the public about the significance of environmental protection.