為了方便廣大考生更好的復(fù)習(xí)，綜合整理了名師指點(diǎn)：SAT寫作權(quán)威指導(dǎo)，以供各位考生考試復(fù)習(xí)參考,希望對(duì)考生復(fù)習(xí)有所幫助。

　　Assignment: Is it better to get all the information before taking action or is it better to take action first and then analyze the process of the whole action? （來源于學(xué)生回憶，可能略有出入）

　　由于5月和10月考試的人數(shù)比較多，所以這兩個(gè)月的作文題目確實(shí)會(huì)比較難。大家可以參考筆者對(duì)于5月作文（Are we defined by what we do？）的點(diǎn)評(píng)。

　　解惑：這是個(gè)選擇式的題目，問各位是先行動(dòng)好，還是得到全部信息然后行動(dòng)更好。

　　比較好寫的方法自然是選擇先得到全部信息，然后行動(dòng)。因?yàn)閺V大考生可以把早就準(zhǔn)備好的個(gè)人例子拿上去套題目。

　　方法：將成功失敗類中的例子稍加改變，第一次做什么事情失敗，因?yàn)橄葲Q定了然后之后的分析非常匆忙，想法不完整導(dǎo)致失?。幌喾吹诙挝×私?jīng)驗(yàn)，獲得全部信息然后決定，最后成功。通過前后對(duì)比，體現(xiàn)出題干中的better。

　　具體操作：

　　首段要體現(xiàn)出比較，指出take action first 的缺點(diǎn)。

　　1 第一步：觀點(diǎn)I prefer getting well prepared before taking action to analyzing the whole process after carrying out a decision.

　　2 第二步：為什么。相對(duì)最難寫，可以先思考例子，然后再提煉邏輯關(guān)系。這篇文章就是

　　Hasty decisions may result in incomplete plans and thus possible failures while full preparation may optimize your decisions.

　　3 第三步：舉什么例子。

　　The example of my aunt Helen could serve as a compelling one.

　　中間段如何寫：

　　這篇文章比較難，因?yàn)槭沁x擇式的，所以最好的寫法是把例子拆成兩個(gè)部分，第一部分是否定的內(nèi)容，即倉促行動(dòng)導(dǎo)致全盤皆輸；第二部分是全面準(zhǔn)備后下決定然后成功的例子。

　　我用一個(gè)最簡單的素材給大家展示。

　　First, she started a restaurant, Helens Place. Though it was popular and did a steady business. Aunt Helen knew little about managing money, so her restaurant went out of business.

　　Then she tried to open a coffeehouse, but there were already many popular coffeehouses in her town, so her coffeehouse never managed to attract many customers.

　　Finally, using knowledge she had gained from earlier businesses, she started her own catering service. It has been a success for ten years now.

　　寫作作為在學(xué)習(xí)和工作過程中的一種基本技能，不僅能夠體現(xiàn)學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)研究過程中對(duì)所學(xué)知識(shí)的總結(jié)表述水平，還能客觀反映其邏輯思維及信息篩選能力。

　　接下來筆者結(jié)合這個(gè)素材進(jìn)行一些營造，寫出思路鏈。但是筆者還是衷心建議各位考生依據(jù)真實(shí)經(jīng)歷進(jìn)行寫作，會(huì)更有真情實(shí)感。

　　第一步：

　　不做計(jì)劃---失敗

　　阿姨為人打工多年，小有積蓄（save up for many years）---希望自己創(chuàng)業(yè)（start up her own business）---因?yàn)橛X得自己廚藝不錯(cuò)，沒有進(jìn)行實(shí)地考察，就倉促?zèng)Q定選擇餐館, （without a moment hesitation，make a decision/action 點(diǎn)題）--- 但是后來發(fā)現(xiàn)餐館沒有什么客戶---原因是所處的地段是中學(xué)附近，競爭對(duì)手實(shí)力過分強(qiáng)大（fierce competition）---可以把對(duì)手細(xì)化成兩類加強(qiáng)真實(shí)感，一類是small profit, large sales revenue; 還有一類是good at creating romantic atmosphere, aimed at rich customers--- 之后阿姨不得不關(guān)門.

　　第二部 過渡

　　阿姨的父親是個(gè)老企業(yè)家，他指出問題阿姨這次失敗的原因所在, 即要做計(jì)劃然后再行動(dòng)---阿姨學(xué)習(xí)了經(jīng)驗(yàn)---下定決心重新起航，并且會(huì)先做好全面準(zhǔn)備工作再?zèng)Q定。

　　注：通常滿分作文都會(huì)出現(xiàn)一個(gè)智者指出主人公問題的所在而不是由主人公自己講出。

　　Despite great disappointment, my optimistic aunt soon recovered from this failure with her fathers encouragement , who pointed out her biggest problem after knowing the whole process. He told my aunt, More haste, less speed. You had better make full preparation before each decision.

　　Having gained experience from her failure, my aunt tried to restart her business three months later. But this time she gave priority to having a deeper understanding of the demands of the local market.

　　第三步 充分準(zhǔn)備--決定進(jìn)行catering service---成功 （這是關(guān)鍵段落，點(diǎn)題）

　　具體就是doing marketing research--- 然后data enabled my aunt to reach a final decision--- 決定進(jìn)行catering service considering its large marketing potential----最后是成功（這里的細(xì)節(jié)大家可以自己去營造，比如年利潤the annual profit increased by 10%, with a market share of in this field）

　　第四步 總結(jié)例子，重述觀點(diǎn)。

　　Had it not been for the full preparation before my aunts second try, she would not have regained her self confidence and established herself as one of the most successful entrepreneurs in Suzhou.

　　Therefore, from my personal experience, we can draw the conclusion that it is more effective to try after careful arrangements.

　　以上是對(duì)于10月份考題的點(diǎn)評(píng)。寫作沒有捷徑，只有通過例子的積累，思維的練習(xí)和勤加動(dòng)筆才能獲得較好的成績。預(yù)?？忌?1月考試順利。

　　為了方便廣大考生更好的復(fù)習(xí)，綜合整理了名師指點(diǎn)：SAT寫作權(quán)威指導(dǎo)，以供各位考生考試復(fù)習(xí)參考,希望對(duì)考生復(fù)習(xí)有所幫助。

　　Assignment: Is it better to get all the information before taking action or is it better to take action first and then analyze the process of the whole action? （來源于學(xué)生回憶，可能略有出入）

　　由于5月和10月考試的人數(shù)比較多，所以這兩個(gè)月的作文題目確實(shí)會(huì)比較難。大家可以參考筆者對(duì)于5月作文（Are we defined by what we do？）的點(diǎn)評(píng)。

　　解惑：這是個(gè)選擇式的題目，問各位是先行動(dòng)好，還是得到全部信息然后行動(dòng)更好。

　　比較好寫的方法自然是選擇先得到全部信息，然后行動(dòng)。因?yàn)閺V大考生可以把早就準(zhǔn)備好的個(gè)人例子拿上去套題目。

　　方法：將成功失敗類中的例子稍加改變，第一次做什么事情失敗，因?yàn)橄葲Q定了然后之后的分析非常匆忙，想法不完整導(dǎo)致失??；相反第二次吸取了經(jīng)驗(yàn)，獲得全部信息然后決定，最后成功。通過前后對(duì)比，體現(xiàn)出題干中的better。

　　具體操作：

　　首段要體現(xiàn)出比較，指出take action first 的缺點(diǎn)。

　　1 第一步：觀點(diǎn)I prefer getting well prepared before taking action to analyzing the whole process after carrying out a decision.

　　2 第二步：為什么。相對(duì)最難寫，可以先思考例子，然后再提煉邏輯關(guān)系。這篇文章就是

　　Hasty decisions may result in incomplete plans and thus possible failures while full preparation may optimize your decisions.

　　3 第三步：舉什么例子。

　　The example of my aunt Helen could serve as a compelling one.

　　中間段如何寫：

　　這篇文章比較難，因?yàn)槭沁x擇式的，所以最好的寫法是把例子拆成兩個(gè)部分，第一部分是否定的內(nèi)容，即倉促行動(dòng)導(dǎo)致全盤皆輸；第二部分是全面準(zhǔn)備后下決定然后成功的例子。

　　我用一個(gè)最簡單的素材給大家展示。

　　First, she started a restaurant, Helens Place. Though it was popular and did a steady business. Aunt Helen knew little about managing money, so her restaurant went out of business.

　　Then she tried to open a coffeehouse, but there were already many popular coffeehouses in her town, so her coffeehouse never managed to attract many customers.

　　Finally, using knowledge she had gained from earlier businesses, she started her own catering service. It has been a success for ten years now.

　　寫作作為在學(xué)習(xí)和工作過程中的一種基本技能，不僅能夠體現(xiàn)學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)研究過程中對(duì)所學(xué)知識(shí)的總結(jié)表述水平，還能客觀反映其邏輯思維及信息篩選能力。

　　接下來筆者結(jié)合這個(gè)素材進(jìn)行一些營造，寫出思路鏈。但是筆者還是衷心建議各位考生依據(jù)真實(shí)經(jīng)歷進(jìn)行寫作，會(huì)更有真情實(shí)感。

　　第一步：

　　不做計(jì)劃---失敗

　　阿姨為人打工多年，小有積蓄（save up for many years）---希望自己創(chuàng)業(yè)（start up her own business）---因?yàn)橛X得自己廚藝不錯(cuò)，沒有進(jìn)行實(shí)地考察，就倉促?zèng)Q定選擇餐館, （without a moment hesitation，make a decision/action 點(diǎn)題）--- 但是后來發(fā)現(xiàn)餐館沒有什么客戶---原因是所處的地段是中學(xué)附近，競爭對(duì)手實(shí)力過分強(qiáng)大（fierce competition）---可以把對(duì)手細(xì)化成兩類加強(qiáng)真實(shí)感，一類是small profit, large sales revenue; 還有一類是good at creating romantic atmosphere, aimed at rich customers--- 之后阿姨不得不關(guān)門.

　　第二部 過渡

　　阿姨的父親是個(gè)老企業(yè)家，他指出問題阿姨這次失敗的原因所在, 即要做計(jì)劃然后再行動(dòng)---阿姨學(xué)習(xí)了經(jīng)驗(yàn)---下定決心重新起航，并且會(huì)先做好全面準(zhǔn)備工作再?zèng)Q定。

　　注：通常滿分作文都會(huì)出現(xiàn)一個(gè)智者指出主人公問題的所在而不是由主人公自己講出。

　　Despite great disappointment, my optimistic aunt soon recovered from this failure with her fathers encouragement , who pointed out her biggest problem after knowing the whole process. He told my aunt, More haste, less speed. You had better make full preparation before each decision.

　　Having gained experience from her failure, my aunt tried to restart her business three months later. But this time she gave priority to having a deeper understanding of the demands of the local market.

　　第三步 充分準(zhǔn)備--決定進(jìn)行catering service---成功 （這是關(guān)鍵段落，點(diǎn)題）

　　具體就是doing marketing research--- 然后data enabled my aunt to reach a final decision--- 決定進(jìn)行catering service considering its large marketing potential----最后是成功（這里的細(xì)節(jié)大家可以自己去營造，比如年利潤the annual profit increased by 10%, with a market share of in this field）

　　第四步 總結(jié)例子，重述觀點(diǎn)。

　　Had it not been for the full preparation before my aunts second try, she would not have regained her self confidence and established herself as one of the most successful entrepreneurs in Suzhou.

　　Therefore, from my personal experience, we can draw the conclusion that it is more effective to try after careful arrangements.

　　以上是對(duì)于10月份考題的點(diǎn)評(píng)。寫作沒有捷徑，只有通過例子的積累，思維的練習(xí)和勤加動(dòng)筆才能獲得較好的成績。預(yù)?？忌?1月考試順利。