專題十五　短文改錯

　　2024～2024年各省市高考題A卷　全國卷

　　Passage 1　(2024·全國)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.

　　答案　

　　My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to

　　I live.Though not very big， the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even

　　to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is .Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables

　　high quality oil are

　　for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams

　　becoming rich in

　　short period of time.Instead，he hopes that

　　business will grow .

　　1．that→where　[考查賓語從句的連詞用法。由句子結構可知，介詞to之后為賓語從句。從句謂語是不及物動詞live。故用where引導。]

　　2．去掉but　[考查從屬連詞與并列連詞。從屬連詞though不可與并列連詞but連用。]

　　3．had→ have　[考查語境中的時態運用。根據上下文語境可知此處要用一般現在時。]

　　4．honest→ honesty　[考查名詞作表語。由句意“他成功的關鍵是誠信”可知應當用名詞形式。]

　　5．or→and　[考查并列連詞的用法。根據句意可知二者之間為并列關系而非選擇關系。]

　　6．using→used　[考查固定短語的用法。be used for“用來做”，為固定短語。]

　　7．在dreams之后加上of或about　[考查短語動詞。固定短語dream of/about (doing) sth.的意思是“夢想做某事”。]

　　8．the→a　[考查代詞的用法。in a short period of time為固定詞組，意思是“短時間內”。]

　　9．our→his　[考查冠詞的用法。短文介紹了my uncle誠信經營餐館的事情，故將our改為his。]

　　10．steady→steadily　[考查副詞的用法。修飾謂語動詞用副詞。]

　　Passage 2　(2024·全國Ⅱ)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

　　刪除：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

　　答案　

　　The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about

　　to do during the holiday.We can

　　between staying at home and

　　a trip.If we stay at home, it is comfortable

　　there is no need to spend money.But in that case, we will learn little about

　　world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden

　　view and gain

　　we can not get from books.Some classmates suggest we

　　go to places of interest nearby.I

　　that it is a good idea.It does not cost ， yet we can still learn a lot.

　　1．how→what　 [考查疑問詞的用法。我和同學正在談論假期里做什么。固定表達what to do，如果用how結構為how to do sth.]

　　2．chose→choose　[考查動詞形式。根據語法知識可知，情態動詞can后要用動詞原形。]

　　3．take→taking　[考查非謂語動詞的用法。此處為between...and...結構，根據前面的staying at home可知，此處也要用動名詞形式，與前面保持一致。]

　　4．but→and　[考查連詞的用法。如果呆在家里，感覺舒適，還不花錢。根據句意可知，此處應是并列關系，而不是轉折關系。]

　　5．world前加the　[考查定冠詞的用法。此處特指我們所生活的這個世界。]

　　6．your→our　[考查形容詞性物主代詞的用法。根據前面的主語we可知，此處要用our，表示“我們能夠開闊我們的視野”。]

　　7knowledges→knowledge　[考查不可數名詞的用法。knowledge為不可數名詞，沒有復數形式。]

　　8．去掉can或can→should　[考查虛擬語氣。suggest表示“建議”，后面的賓語從句要用should do形式，should可以省略，故答案有兩種改法。]

　　9．thought→think　[考查一般現在時的用法。我認為這是一個好主意。根據上下文可知，此處并

　　10．many→much　[考查代詞的用法。這樣不會花很多錢。cost much花費很多。此處也可理解為much money的省略。]

　　Passage 3　(2024·全國)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However，my parents didnt seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I ever felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.

　　答案　

　　The teenage

　　from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and

　　years in my life.At

　　first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by .However，my parents didnt seem to think .They always

　　me what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I ever felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be

　　from them.I showed them I was independent by

　　strange clothes.Now I am leaving home

　　college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever

　　need help.

　　【語篇導讀】　本文主要講述了青少與父母之間的關系。

　　1．year→years　[13～19 歲的年齡，故用復數。]

　　2．worse→worst　[與前面的best并列，此處應用最高級。]

　　3．去掉the　[at first 固定短語。]

　　4．yourself→myself　[根據句意，此處指“我自己”。]

　　5．such→so　[so 指已經提到的事。]

　　6．tell→told　[此處應用過去時態。]

　　7．freely→free　[此處應用形容詞作表語。]

　　8．wear→wearing　[此處用動名詞作介詞的賓語。]

　　9．to→for　[固定搭配 leave for 去……。]

　　10．whenever后加I　[whenever引導狀語從句，從句缺少主語I。]

　　Passage 4　(2024·新課標全國)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.

　　答案　

　　When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I

　　I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in

　　countryside.There the air is clean

　　the mountains are green.Unfortunately， the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have

　　shown that global warming has already become a very

　　problem.The

　　we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are dying out.We must

　　ways to protect

　　environment.If we fail to do so，we’ll live to regret it.

　　1．think→thought　[考查動詞的時態。根據前面一句可知，這是發生在小時候的事情，故用一般過去時態。]

　　2．countryside前加the　[考查冠詞的用法。in the countryside (在鄉村)為固定短語。]

　　3．or→and　[

　　4．on→with　[考查介詞的用法。with the development of...為一固定短語，意思是“隨著……的發展”。]

　　5．去掉been　[考查被動語態的用法。眾多研究表明，全球變暖已經成為一個十分嚴重的問題。由句意可知，studies和謂語show之間為主動關系，故要用主動語態。]

　　6．seriously→serious　[考查形容詞的用法。修飾名詞problem應當用形容詞。]

　　7．airs→air　[考查不可數名詞的用法。air作“空氣”講時為不可數名詞。]

　　8．Much→Many　[考查代詞的用法。animals為可數名詞復數，故用many。]

　　9．found→find　[考查情態動詞的用法。情態動詞后面要接動詞原

　　10．your→our/the　[考查語境中代詞的用法。依據前后句的語境及邏輯關系可知your與上下文相悖，結合句意應當改為our/the才能使句意通順。]

　　Passage 5　(2024·新課標全國)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

　　答案　

　　One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his .It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy

　　a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After

　　at the toy for some time，he turned around and found

　　his parents were missing.Tony was scared and

　　to cry.A woman saw him crying and

　　him to wait outside

　　shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw

　　parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were

　　worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

　　1．parent→parents　[考查名詞復數。由第五句中的“his parents were missing.”可知此處應當用復數形式]

　　2．on→in　[考查介詞的用法。玩具是擺放在商店的櫥窗里面的，故用介詞in。]

　　3．去掉very　[考查固定句型的用法。由語境可知，托尼非常喜歡這個玩具，于是快速走進商店。so...that...為固定句型，意思是“如此……以至于……”，故去掉very。]

　　4．looks→looking　[考查省略的用法。After之后省去了主語he，he與look at之

　　5．去掉where或where→that　[考查賓語從句連接詞的用法。動詞found之后為賓語從句，從句為系表結構，意思完整，故將where去掉或改為沒有詞義且不作成分的that。]

　　6．begun→began　[考查并列謂語的用法。由句子結構可知，begin與was scared并列，因此，要用一般過去時。]

　　7．telling→told　[考查并tell這一動作是這個婦女發出的，應當與saw構成并列謂語。故改用told。]

　　8．a→the　[考查冠詞的用法。表示談話雙方共知的名詞前要用定冠詞。]

　　9．saw后加his　[考查物主代詞的用法。根據句意及英語表達習慣，應當在parents前加上與主語相一致的物主代詞。]

　　10．terrible→terribly　[考查副詞worried之前要用副詞來修飾。]

　　Passage 6　(2024·新課標全國)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self－seed where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully