2024屆高考英語二輪專題復習 書面表達限時測驗5（含答案）

　　1．全體高三學生目前正處在緊張復習迎考的氛圍中。假如你叫李，高三學生，面對目前的壓力，想和父母說說知心話，請你用英文在你的博客上用書信形式表達出來。主要內容如下：

　　知心話 感

　　恩 關切鼓勵，傾注愛心

　　對父母的期望 1. 多交流，使自己保持良好狀態

　　2. 創造條件，給自己提供適時幫助

　　學習打算 … …

　　注意：1. 短文須包括所有內容要點，可適當發揮。

　　2. 詞數：10左右。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　注意；1．必須包括圖畫所表現的主要內容，可以適當增減細節，使其連貫、完整；

　　2．詞數：不少于100詞。

　　Sharing housework

　　4．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

　　As we all know, the “(passenger) transport during the Spring Festival period” has been a hot phrase all through the China land.

　　The volume of passenger traffic(客運量) reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways(鐵道部) has come up with solutions. For instance, it arranges extra trains during the peak time for passenger transport as well as opens 24-hour ticket sales windows for passengers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providing convenience for passengers.

　　One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passengers are migrant workers returning home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selling tickets broke down under too much pressure of operation. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn’t suit nowadays’ situation.

　　[寫作內容]

　　以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。

　　以約120個詞對“春運”進一步敘寫，內容包括：

　　自己親身經歷或者聽聞的一次火車春運的狀況；

　　“網上售票”引起人們不滿的原因；

　　給鐵道部或者農民工提出解決“網上購票”問題的合理化建議。

　　[寫作要求]

　　作文中可以使用親身經歷或者虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　[評分標準]

　　概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語句連貫。

　　5．

　　你的同學劉芳樂于助人(helpful),積極樂觀(positive)。她在上星期日下午回校途中幫助了一位受傷的老人。請根據題示,用英語寫一篇短文向英語報 English Times投稿,簡要敘述她做好事的經過,并談談你的感想。

　　注意:(1)短文須包括上述全部要點,應適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;

　　(2)詞數:100左右。短文開頭已給出(不計詞數)。

　　Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.

　　參考答案

　　1．one possible version:

　　Dear Mom and Dad,

　　The annual University Entrance Examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you.

　　Throughout these years, I always feel grateful to you for your unfailing help, care and love. I have been making remarkable?progress in my studies thanks to your constant encouragement. It’ll be no more than one year before I take the University Entrance Examination, which makes me under greater pressure. I need frequent support. Good learning conditions and timely help from you will do me a lot of good.

　　Mom and Dad, my dream is the very one you always have. I’m fully aware of the responsibilities I am bearing. I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examination so that I can review lessons and practice solving problems of different subjects. It is also necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit. If possible, as a family member, I will also help do some housework to make you relax a little bit.

　　I am quite confident of my study. I do wish you good health and a happy life.

　　Yours ever,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】略

　　2．略

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：本文的寫作首先對自己一天的打算進行描寫，如本打算去打球的，看到媽媽正在打水準備洗衣服，自己感到媽媽肯定很累，所以決定幫助媽媽干活，然后在洗衣服時，朋友來叫我去打球，我委婉的拒絕了，感到自己要先幫助媽媽干活再去玩，最后當媽媽回家時看到衣服都洗干凈了特別的開心，還夸耀我是個懂事的好孩子，我盡管很累但是非常的高興。

　　3．

　　Dear teacher，

　　Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I came to this school. When I am in trouble，you always encourage me and cheer me up. You are kind but strict with us.You never allow us to pretend that we know what we don't know. You often tell us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding. With your help，my English has greatly improved. Thank you for caring about me，and I will work harder in the future.

　　Best wishes.

　　Li hua

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：考查應用文中的感謝信的寫作。用英語給老師寫一封感謝信，表示你對老師關愛和幫助的感謝，要點是提綱，具體的內容要自己拓展，注意把握中心，圍繞中心展開論述，審題時注意本文使用一般現在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。

　　【亮點說明】Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. 這句話里面的fail的用法很好，比“I don’t know”要好多了，You have taken good care of me since I came to this school.這句話用了since引導時間狀語從句， When I am in trouble，you always encourage me and cheer me up.這句話用時間狀語從句和be in trouble和cheer sb up詞組，You never allow us to pretend that we know what we don't know. 這句話有兩個賓語從句，You often tell us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding. 這句話用了it做形式主語， Thank you for caring about me，and I will work harder in the future.這是并列句和動名詞的用法。

　　考點：考查感謝信的寫法

　　4．

　　Although it is as crowded as usual during the “transport during the Spring Festival period”, many solutions have been raised. But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many are dissatisfied.

　　Last year, I, together with my parents, went to our hometown by train. At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket. Worse still, it was raining and we had to wait in queue patiently for our turn to buy tickets. This year, things are much better. We can buy tickets through Internet. However, some other problems appear.

　　Reasons for the problems of buying tickets on-line are divided. For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. Also, the ticket-selling system is not advanced enough to cope with difficult situations.

　　To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets. As for migrant workers, they can learn to purchase their tickets on-line with the help of Internet or co-workers. Choosing other means of transportation to return back is also available.

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內容。認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。

　　【亮點說明】文章簡潔的總結了所給材料，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫，使用了詞組和句型：cope with 處理，As for 至于，with the help of 在…的幫助下，Worse still更糟糕的是,

　　But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many are dissatisfied. 這句話用了with復合結構， At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket.這句話用了賓語從句和it做形式主語， For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. 這句話用了動名詞做主語， To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets.這句話用了不定式做目的狀語。

　　考點：考查讀寫任務式書面表達

　　5．Possible version:

　　Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.

　　Last Sunday afternoon, on her way back to school, Liu Fang came across an old man lying on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. She immediately stopped, called 120 and practiced first aid. Soon, the ambulance came. When everything was Ok, she left for school.

　　Such is Liu Fang, a helpful, positive and determined person. Although there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good, I strongly believe that she has done the right thing. As responsible citizens, it is our duty to help people in need. Also, helping others means helping ourselves in a sense, doesn’t it?

　　【解析】考查了記敘文的寫作

　　試題分析：本文考查了記敘文的寫作，故事的梗概已經給出。劉芳樂于助人，看見老人摔倒，他主動提出幫助，并對老人進行適當的包扎治療和救助。并撥打120急救電話，協助醫生對病人進行護理。

　　2024屆高考英語二輪專題復習 書面表達限時測驗5（含答案）

　　1．全體高三學生目前正處在緊張復習迎考的氛圍中。假如你叫李，高三學生，面對目前的壓力，想和父母說說知心話，請你用英文在你的博客上用書信形式表達出來。主要內容如下：

　　知心話 感

　　恩 關切鼓勵，傾注愛心

　　對父母的期望 1. 多交流，使自己保持良好狀態

　　2. 創造條件，給自己提供適時幫助

　　學習打算 … …

　　注意：1. 短文須包括所有內容要點，可適當發揮。

　　2. 詞數：10左右。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　注意；1．必須包括圖畫所表現的主要內容，可以適當增減細節，使其連貫、完整；

　　2．詞數：不少于100詞。

　　Sharing housework

　　4．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

　　As we all know, the “(passenger) transport during the Spring Festival period” has been a hot phrase all through the China land.

　　The volume of passenger traffic(客運量) reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways(鐵道部) has come up with solutions. For instance, it arranges extra trains during the peak time for passenger transport as well as opens 24-hour ticket sales windows for passengers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providing convenience for passengers.

　　One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passengers are migrant workers returning home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selling tickets broke down under too much pressure of operation. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn’t suit nowadays’ situation.

　　[寫作內容]

　　以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。

　　以約120個詞對“春運”進一步敘寫，內容包括：

　　自己親身經歷或者聽聞的一次火車春運的狀況；

　　“網上售票”引起人們不滿的原因；

　　給鐵道部或者農民工提出解決“網上購票”問題的合理化建議。

　　[寫作要求]

　　作文中可以使用親身經歷或者虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　[評分標準]

　　概括準確，語言規范，內容合適，語句連貫。

　　5．

　　你的同學劉芳樂于助人(helpful),積極樂觀(positive)。她在上星期日下午回校途中幫助了一位受傷的老人。請根據題示,用英語寫一篇短文向英語報 English Times投稿,簡要敘述她做好事的經過,并談談你的感想。

　　注意:(1)短文須包括上述全部要點,應適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;

　　(2)詞數:100左右。短文開頭已給出(不計詞數)。

　　Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.

　　參考答案

　　1．one possible version:

　　Dear Mom and Dad,

　　The annual University Entrance Examination is around the corner. On this special occasion, how I wish I could have a heart-to-heart talk with you.

　　Throughout these years, I always feel grateful to you for your unfailing help, care and love. I have been making remarkable?progress in my studies thanks to your constant encouragement. It’ll be no more than one year before I take the University Entrance Examination, which makes me under greater pressure. I need frequent support. Good learning conditions and timely help from you will do me a lot of good.

　　Mom and Dad, my dream is the very one you always have. I’m fully aware of the responsibilities I am bearing. I plan to make a detailed study schedule for this coming examination so that I can review lessons and practice solving problems of different subjects. It is also necessary that I do some physical training once in a while so that I can keep fit. If possible, as a family member, I will also help do some housework to make you relax a little bit.

　　I am quite confident of my study. I do wish you good health and a happy life.

　　Yours ever,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】略

　　2．略

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：本文的寫作首先對自己一天的打算進行描寫，如本打算去打球的，看到媽媽正在打水準備洗衣服，自己感到媽媽肯定很累，所以決定幫助媽媽干活，然后在洗衣服時，朋友來叫我去打球，我委婉的拒絕了，感到自己要先幫助媽媽干活再去玩，最后當媽媽回家時看到衣服都洗干凈了特別的開心，還夸耀我是個懂事的好孩子，我盡管很累但是非常的高興。

　　3．

　　Dear teacher，

　　Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I came to this school. When I am in trouble，you always encourage me and cheer me up. You are kind but strict with us.You never allow us to pretend that we know what we don't know. You often tell us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding. With your help，my English has greatly improved. Thank you for caring about me，and I will work harder in the future.

　　Best wishes.

　　Li hua

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：考查應用文中的感謝信的寫作。用英語給老師寫一封感謝信，表示你對老師關愛和幫助的感謝，要點是提綱，具體的內容要自己拓展，注意把握中心，圍繞中心展開論述，審題時注意本文使用一般現在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。

　　【亮點說明】Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. 這句話里面的fail的用法很好，比“I don’t know”要好多了，You have taken good care of me since I came to this school.這句話用了since引導時間狀語從句， When I am in trouble，you always encourage me and cheer me up.這句話用時間狀語從句和be in trouble和cheer sb up詞組，You never allow us to pretend that we know what we don't know. 這句話有兩個賓語從句，You often tell us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding. 這句話用了it做形式主語， Thank you for caring about me，and I will work harder in the future.這是并列句和動名詞的用法。

　　考點：考查感謝信的寫法

　　4．

　　Although it is as crowded as usual during the “transport during the Spring Festival period”, many solutions have been raised. But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many are dissatisfied.

　　Last year, I, together with my parents, went to our hometown by train. At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket. Worse still, it was raining and we had to wait in queue patiently for our turn to buy tickets. This year, things are much better. We can buy tickets through Internet. However, some other problems appear.

　　Reasons for the problems of buying tickets on-line are divided. For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. Also, the ticket-selling system is not advanced enough to cope with difficult situations.

　　To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets. As for migrant workers, they can learn to purchase their tickets on-line with the help of Internet or co-workers. Choosing other means of transportation to return back is also available.

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內容。認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。

　　【亮點說明】文章簡潔的總結了所給材料，語言規范，內容合適，語篇連貫，使用了詞組和句型：cope with 處理，As for 至于，with the help of 在…的幫助下，Worse still更糟糕的是,

　　But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many are dissatisfied. 這句話用了with復合結構， At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket.這句話用了賓語從句和it做形式主語， For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. 這句話用了動名詞做主語， To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets.這句話用了不定式做目的狀語。

　　考點：考查讀寫任務式書面表達

　　5．Possible version:

　　Nowadays, a lot of people are reportedly unwilling to help others. However, Liu Fang acted differently.

　　Last Sunday afternoon, on her way back to school, Liu Fang came across an old man lying on the ground, seriously hurt in the leg. She immediately stopped, called 120 and practiced first aid. Soon, the ambulance came. When everything was Ok, she left for school.

　　Such is Liu Fang, a helpful, positive and determined person. Although there might be misunderstanding or even trouble when we do good, I strongly believe that she has done the right thing. As responsible citizens, it is our duty to help people in need. Also, helping others means helping ourselves in a sense, doesn’t it?

　　【解析】考查了記敘文的寫作

　　試題分析：本文考查了記敘文的寫作，故事的梗概已經給出。劉芳樂于助人，看見老人摔倒，他主動提出幫助，并對老人進行適當的包扎治療和救助。并撥打120急救電話，協助醫生對病人進行護理。