11月10日雅思寫作的范文及語料庫解析
三段：國家培養專業運動的弊端 + 普及民眾體育設施的利好：
Granted, there is no garden without weeds. Excessive investment in training professional sportsmen might make the money fly, after all, we have more pressing social problems that need support from the public purse such as popularizing free education or ameliorating medical care. An argument might be hold by some people is that to provide common people with more sports facilities could create more possibilities of enhancing the heath index amongst the general public. By contrast, professional sports facilities could only serve small group of people.
翻譯：的確，沒有不長雜草的花園，，在培養運動員方面過度投資等于浪費金錢。畢竟，我們有更加緊迫的民生問題需要來自國庫的財政支持例如教育和醫療。同時，很多人也會認為，普及推廣民眾體育設施可以為更多普通人的健身提供良好的契機，相反，運動員使用的專業體育設施只有少數人才能使用。
新東方薛鵬原創語料庫總結：
1. might make the money fly v 等于浪費金錢
2. financial support from the public purse 來自國家的財政支持
3. popularize free education v普及免費教育
4. ameliorate medical care v 改善醫療
5. create more possibilities of doing sth v 創造更多的 的可能性;
6. enhance the heath index amongst the general public. v 提高民眾的健康指數
尾段：再次亮明觀點 + 總結理由：
My stand is that to train a large proportion of athletes enjoys many visible virtues such as educating the pubic, kindling peoples zeal of doing physical exercises and enhancing a nations international influence.
翻譯：我的立場是培養專業運動員利好很多，例如對于公眾的教育意義，點燃民眾建設熱情，提高國家的國際地位。
原創語料庫點評：
1. a large proportion of 大量的
2. kindling peoples zeal of 點燃熱情
全文點評：文無定法，小鵬哥范文只是范文寫作之一種。該文自由寫作;淡化模板;主題明確;論證飽滿，詞匯變化;句型多樣;用到許多的雅思閱讀以及考官常用的詞匯;詞匯句法來著我多年的詞匯教學和閱讀教學積累。
三段：國家培養專業運動的弊端 + 普及民眾體育設施的利好：
Granted, there is no garden without weeds. Excessive investment in training professional sportsmen might make the money fly, after all, we have more pressing social problems that need support from the public purse such as popularizing free education or ameliorating medical care. An argument might be hold by some people is that to provide common people with more sports facilities could create more possibilities of enhancing the heath index amongst the general public. By contrast, professional sports facilities could only serve small group of people.
翻譯：的確，沒有不長雜草的花園，，在培養運動員方面過度投資等于浪費金錢。畢竟，我們有更加緊迫的民生問題需要來自國庫的財政支持例如教育和醫療。同時，很多人也會認為，普及推廣民眾體育設施可以為更多普通人的健身提供良好的契機，相反，運動員使用的專業體育設施只有少數人才能使用。
新東方薛鵬原創語料庫總結：
1. might make the money fly v 等于浪費金錢
2. financial support from the public purse 來自國家的財政支持
3. popularize free education v普及免費教育
4. ameliorate medical care v 改善醫療
5. create more possibilities of doing sth v 創造更多的 的可能性;
6. enhance the heath index amongst the general public. v 提高民眾的健康指數
尾段：再次亮明觀點 + 總結理由：
My stand is that to train a large proportion of athletes enjoys many visible virtues such as educating the pubic, kindling peoples zeal of doing physical exercises and enhancing a nations international influence.
翻譯：我的立場是培養專業運動員利好很多，例如對于公眾的教育意義，點燃民眾建設熱情，提高國家的國際地位。
原創語料庫點評：
1. a large proportion of 大量的
2. kindling peoples zeal of 點燃熱情
全文點評：文無定法，小鵬哥范文只是范文寫作之一種。該文自由寫作;淡化模板;主題明確;論證飽滿，詞匯變化;句型多樣;用到許多的雅思閱讀以及考官常用的詞匯;詞匯句法來著我多年的詞匯教學和閱讀教學積累。
