I am a undergraduate with Department of Chinese Language and Literature in Nangjing University.I am writing to express my interest in your resently advertised position for a secretary of staff office in your corporation.I would much grateful if you are so kind as to take my application into consideration.

　　sincerely yours,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear sir(因為不知道將會是男士還是女士，所以應該用Sir or Madam), I am a undergraduate with Department of Chinese Languageand Literature(in Chinese Language and Literature Department)in Nangjing(Nanjing) University. I am writing to express my interest in your resently(拼寫錯誤，recently) advertised position for a secretary of staff office in your corporation. I would much grateful if you are so kind as to take my application into consideration. It is falling in with my previous training and strengthen(這里需要一個名詞strength) to apply for the position of your company. firstly(f大寫), I am(加補丁冠詞a) young man who have cheerful personality and strong professional spirit. secondly(s大寫), Relative(r小寫)certificatons(拼寫錯誤，certifications) like university graduation certification, computer degree qualification, ect(etc.) have been caquired(拼寫錯誤，acquired). Please contact me via LingMing@126.com or call 1234567 to inform whether I will having(will后用動詞原形) been invited .Looking forword(拼寫錯誤，forward) to your reply. Thank you for your time and consideration. sincerely yours(一般用Yours sincerely，還是隨大流比較好), Li Ming 點評：5-6分。第二段應該再寫多一點內容，要讓你自己有說服力。雖說是要簡短，但是不能過于簡短。

　　另外要注意大小寫的問題和單詞拼寫問題。

　　I am a undergraduate with Department of Chinese Language and Literature in Nangjing University.I am writing to express my interest in your resently advertised position for a secretary of staff office in your corporation.I would much grateful if you are so kind as to take my application into consideration.

　　sincerely yours,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear sir(因為不知道將會是男士還是女士，所以應該用Sir or Madam), I am a undergraduate with Department of Chinese Languageand Literature(in Chinese Language and Literature Department)in Nangjing(Nanjing) University. I am writing to express my interest in your resently(拼寫錯誤，recently) advertised position for a secretary of staff office in your corporation. I would much grateful if you are so kind as to take my application into consideration. It is falling in with my previous training and strengthen(這里需要一個名詞strength) to apply for the position of your company. firstly(f大寫), I am(加補丁冠詞a) young man who have cheerful personality and strong professional spirit. secondly(s大寫), Relative(r小寫)certificatons(拼寫錯誤，certifications) like university graduation certification, computer degree qualification, ect(etc.) have been caquired(拼寫錯誤，acquired). Please contact me via LingMing@126.com or call 1234567 to inform whether I will having(will后用動詞原形) been invited .Looking forword(拼寫錯誤，forward) to your reply. Thank you for your time and consideration. sincerely yours(一般用Yours sincerely，還是隨大流比較好), Li Ming 點評：5-6分。第二段應該再寫多一點內容，要讓你自己有說服力。雖說是要簡短，但是不能過于簡短。

　　另外要注意大小寫的問題和單詞拼寫問題。