考研英語待批改作文：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　Im writting this letter in order to applying for your recently advrtised position for interior designer .I obtain the news form newpaer.I am suer that I am qualitied it .

　　I am a interior designer from Department of Envionmental Art.With this letter that I proved detail resume. First ,I have been work experience for 7 years. Second, I have acquiet many detail of struction ,Equipment, local and national lows. Third, I could ripidly operating computer. In addition, I could led the team work owing to I have cheerful personality.

　　Finally, I look forward to your reply,and to attending yours company.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　Im writting(拼寫錯誤，writing) this letter in order to applying(改成apply，in order to do) for your recently advrtised(拼寫錯誤，advertised) position for interior designer .I obtain the news form(加冠詞)newpaer(拼寫錯誤，newspaper). I am suer(拼寫錯誤，sure) that I am qualitied(拼寫錯誤，qualified to，加介詞to) it .

　　I am a(應該用不定冠詞an，后面是以元音開頭的詞語) interior designer from Department of Envionmental(拼寫錯誤，environmental) Art. With this letter that I proved detail resume. First ,I have been work experience for 7 years(可以說I have worked for 7 years或是I have a seven-year work experience，但是不能將兩種說話合在一起說). Second, I have acquiet(拼寫錯誤，acquired?) many detail(應該用復數details) of struction(拼寫錯誤，structure?) , Equipment(e不用大寫), local and national lows. Third, I could ripidly(拼寫錯誤，rapidly) operating computer. In addition, I could led the team work owing to I have cheerful personality.

　　Finally, I look forward to your reply, and to attending yours company.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming(這一部分寫在右下角)

　　點評：4-5分

　　主要的問題是拼寫錯誤比較多，這會讓自己的作文比較吃虧，好好背一下常用單詞的拼寫。寫完作文后快速檢查一遍內容。

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　Im writting this letter in order to applying for your recently advrtised position for interior designer .I obtain the news form newpaer.I am suer that I am qualitied it .

　　I am a interior designer from Department of Envionmental Art.With this letter that I proved detail resume. First ,I have been work experience for 7 years. Second, I have acquiet many detail of struction ,Equipment, local and national lows. Third, I could ripidly operating computer. In addition, I could led the team work owing to I have cheerful personality.

　　Finally, I look forward to your reply,and to attending yours company.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　Im writting(拼寫錯誤，writing) this letter in order to applying(改成apply，in order to do) for your recently advrtised(拼寫錯誤，advertised) position for interior designer .I obtain the news form(加冠詞)newpaer(拼寫錯誤，newspaper). I am suer(拼寫錯誤，sure) that I am qualitied(拼寫錯誤，qualified to，加介詞to) it .

　　I am a(應該用不定冠詞an，后面是以元音開頭的詞語) interior designer from Department of Envionmental(拼寫錯誤，environmental) Art. With this letter that I proved detail resume. First ,I have been work experience for 7 years(可以說I have worked for 7 years或是I have a seven-year work experience，但是不能將兩種說話合在一起說). Second, I have acquiet(拼寫錯誤，acquired?) many detail(應該用復數details) of struction(拼寫錯誤，structure?) , Equipment(e不用大寫), local and national lows. Third, I could ripidly(拼寫錯誤，rapidly) operating computer. In addition, I could led the team work owing to I have cheerful personality.

　　Finally, I look forward to your reply, and to attending yours company.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Ming(這一部分寫在右下角)

　　點評：4-5分

　　主要的問題是拼寫錯誤比較多，這會讓自己的作文比較吃虧，好好背一下常用單詞的拼寫。寫完作文后快速檢查一遍內容。