考研英語(yǔ)待批改作文：

　　8-10分

　　Dear Mr. Yu,

　　I just read an advertisement in job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

　　I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear Mr. Yu,

　　I just read an advertisement in(改為on) job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

　　I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of the Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　8分

　　同學(xué)你好，要注意控制字?jǐn)?shù)，考研的時(shí)候超過20個(gè)詞扣0.5分,超過50詞只給1分辛苦分。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)與后面的單詞空一格。你的作文沒有大問題，但是你對(duì)介詞的使用不太清楚，這說明你的語(yǔ)感還不太好，因此，建議你多讀一些英文書籍。

　　考研英語(yǔ)待批改作文：

　　8-10分

　　Dear Mr. Yu,

　　I just read an advertisement in job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

　　I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear Mr. Yu,

　　I just read an advertisement in(改為on) job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

　　I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of the Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　8分

　　同學(xué)你好，要注意控制字?jǐn)?shù)，考研的時(shí)候超過20個(gè)詞扣0.5分,超過50詞只給1分辛苦分。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)與后面的單詞空一格。你的作文沒有大問題，但是你對(duì)介詞的使用不太清楚，這說明你的語(yǔ)感還不太好，因此，建議你多讀一些英文書籍。