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　　AS Is shown above,a funny hen claimed that her eggs with no edge and the like which is the most fundamntional.Simple as the drawing is ,the symbolic meaning behind ti is as deep as oceanThe honest is not only necessary,but also indepensible.As the old Chinese proverb says.Honest is gold.However,in no country other than China,it has been said that,the problum of opposite the pormise more serious ,and people fail to attach attention to the gold.Individuals and organizations can make money,take porfits and even obtain wealth by attend promise.To be honest can also have added benefit of increasing ones knowledge,giving us a new perspective of outside world.According to a survey conducted by China Acadmyof Science,honest can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problumsas depression,stress,isolation and solitudeAll in all,obtainthe promise plays a key role in our daily life.The unhonest, in view of the complexity of such issue,we must treat it socially,economically and culturally.with a proper law,an up-to-date solution,a right perspective and alert public,it will be a matter of time before the problum becomes things of the past.

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　　作文能夠按照寫(xiě)作要求來(lái)寫(xiě)，寫(xiě)作格式基本符合要求。但是文中的問(wèn)題較多，比如：?jiǎn)卧~的拼寫(xiě)問(wèn)題、語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題、句子的邏輯關(guān)系問(wèn)題等。希望作者在后面的復(fù)習(xí)中，先不要急于寫(xiě)文章，從基本的入手，先積累詞匯、學(xué)習(xí)基本語(yǔ)法、積累并模仿高分語(yǔ)言佳句;將重點(diǎn)放在語(yǔ)句模仿上，有空多讀外文期刊，了解英語(yǔ)的地道表達(dá)，從而不斷提高自己的寫(xiě)作水平。建議作者將每周的時(shí)間做一個(gè)合理的規(guī)劃，一周練習(xí)一篇作文即可，在練習(xí)這篇作文時(shí)，可先積累此方面的詞匯，之后兩天可查找有關(guān)方面的經(jīng)典表達(dá)及例文，然后再模仿佳句，等這些都做到位時(shí)，再組織文章。希望看到你的進(jìn)步，加油，祝你考研成功!

　　寫(xiě)作原文

　　AS Is shown above,a funny hen claimed that her eggs with no edge and the like which is the most fundamntional.Simple as the drawing is ,the symbolic meaning behind ti is as deep as oceanThe honest is not only necessary,but also indepensible.As the old Chinese proverb says.Honest is gold.However,in no country other than China,it has been said that,the problum of opposite the pormise more serious ,and people fail to attach attention to the gold.Individuals and organizations can make money,take porfits and even obtain wealth by attend promise.To be honest can also have added benefit of increasing ones knowledge,giving us a new perspective of outside world.According to a survey conducted by China Acadmyof Science,honest can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problumsas depression,stress,isolation and solitudeAll in all,obtainthe promise plays a key role in our daily life.The unhonest, in view of the complexity of such issue,we must treat it socially,economically and culturally.with a proper law,an up-to-date solution,a right perspective and alert public,it will be a matter of time before the problum becomes things of the past.

　　總體點(diǎn)評(píng)

　　作文能夠按照寫(xiě)作要求來(lái)寫(xiě)，寫(xiě)作格式基本符合要求。但是文中的問(wèn)題較多，比如：?jiǎn)卧~的拼寫(xiě)問(wèn)題、語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題、句子的邏輯關(guān)系問(wèn)題等。希望作者在后面的復(fù)習(xí)中，先不要急于寫(xiě)文章，從基本的入手，先積累詞匯、學(xué)習(xí)基本語(yǔ)法、積累并模仿高分語(yǔ)言佳句;將重點(diǎn)放在語(yǔ)句模仿上，有空多讀外文期刊，了解英語(yǔ)的地道表達(dá)，從而不斷提高自己的寫(xiě)作水平。建議作者將每周的時(shí)間做一個(gè)合理的規(guī)劃，一周練習(xí)一篇作文即可，在練習(xí)這篇作文時(shí)，可先積累此方面的詞匯，之后兩天可查找有關(guān)方面的經(jīng)典表達(dá)及例文，然后再模仿佳句，等這些都做到位時(shí)，再組織文章。希望看到你的進(jìn)步，加油，祝你考研成功!