第一部分、四級作文：記敘文題型作文DIY寫作步驟

　　要求考生寫一篇記敘文，描述事件發(fā)生的時間、地點、原因、人物及結(jié)果，最后對事件進行簡單分析

　　對這類題型，通常分為三個步驟來寫：

　　第一段、總結(jié)描述

　　交代清楚故事涉及的人物、時間、地點：

　　主題句

　　第二段、具體描述

　　具體描述事件發(fā)生的原因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果

　　起因＋經(jīng)過＋結(jié)果

　　第三段、對事件的分析

　　分析句1+分析句2+分析3

　　第二部分、記敘文題型作文DIY寫作范文練習(xí)

　　［實戰(zhàn)演練］

　　Directions：For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill.

　　1、簡單描述一下這位同學(xué)生病的情況；

　　2、同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他的；

　　3、人和人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛給我的感受是....

　　［DIY寫作模板：架構(gòu)階段］

　　第一段：

　　開篇句：About _____ Oclock one evening in _______, _____.

　　擴展句：________.

　　第二段：

　　主題句：Without hesitation, _____. It wasnt long before _____.

　　擴展句：1、One ______.

　　2、Another _______.

　　3、Our teacher _______.

　　第三段：

　　結(jié)尾句：Is _______? Who can tell ? But ______.

　　擴展句：1、When ____ , people showed _____ spirit regardless of ____.

　　2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.

　　3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.

　　［DIY寫作模板：填充階段］

　　第一段：

　　開篇句：Aboutnine Oclock one evening inMay, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.

　　擴展句：His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot.We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.

　　第二段：

　　主題句：Without hesitation, I dialed 120. It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived.

　　擴展句：1、One roommate brought a blanket for him.

　　2、Another supported him in the ambulance.

　　3、Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.

　　第三段：

　　結(jié)尾句：Ishe a suspedted SARS patient? Who can tell ? Butwedidt retreat.

　　擴展句：1、Whenthe savage SARS was spreading,people showedfearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.

　　2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.

　　3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.

　　第三部分、范文

　　About nine Oclock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot. We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.

　　Without hesitation, I dialed 120. It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. One roommate brought a blanket for him. Another supported him in the ambulance. Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.

　　Is he a suspedted SARS patient? Who can tell ? But we didt retreat. When the savage SARS was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.

　　第一部分、四級作文：記敘文題型作文DIY寫作步驟

　　要求考生寫一篇記敘文，描述事件發(fā)生的時間、地點、原因、人物及結(jié)果，最后對事件進行簡單分析

　　對這類題型，通常分為三個步驟來寫：

　　第一段、總結(jié)描述

　　交代清楚故事涉及的人物、時間、地點：

　　主題句

　　第二段、具體描述

　　具體描述事件發(fā)生的原因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果

　　起因＋經(jīng)過＋結(jié)果

　　第三段、對事件的分析

　　分析句1+分析句2+分析3

　　第二部分、記敘文題型作文DIY寫作范文練習(xí)

　　［實戰(zhàn)演練］

　　Directions：For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill.

　　1、簡單描述一下這位同學(xué)生病的情況；

　　2、同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他的；

　　3、人和人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛給我的感受是....

　　［DIY寫作模板：架構(gòu)階段］

　　第一段：

　　開篇句：About _____ Oclock one evening in _______, _____.

　　擴展句：________.

　　第二段：

　　主題句：Without hesitation, _____. It wasnt long before _____.

　　擴展句：1、One ______.

　　2、Another _______.

　　3、Our teacher _______.

　　第三段：

　　結(jié)尾句：Is _______? Who can tell ? But ______.

　　擴展句：1、When ____ , people showed _____ spirit regardless of ____.

　　2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.

　　3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.

　　［DIY寫作模板：填充階段］

　　第一段：

　　開篇句：Aboutnine Oclock one evening inMay, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.

　　擴展句：His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot.We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.

　　第二段：

　　主題句：Without hesitation, I dialed 120. It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived.

　　擴展句：1、One roommate brought a blanket for him.

　　2、Another supported him in the ambulance.

　　3、Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.

　　第三段：

　　結(jié)尾句：Ishe a suspedted SARS patient? Who can tell ? Butwedidt retreat.

　　擴展句：1、Whenthe savage SARS was spreading,people showedfearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.

　　2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.

　　3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.

　　第三部分、范文

　　About nine Oclock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot. We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.

　　Without hesitation, I dialed 120. It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. One roommate brought a blanket for him. Another supported him in the ambulance. Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.

　　Is he a suspedted SARS patient? Who can tell ? But we didt retreat. When the savage SARS was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.