英語四級寫作計劃第一周第1天說明現象類佳作賞析
五、每日佳作賞析
Directions:For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled . The Celebration of Western Festivals . You shoule write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
1.現在國內有不少人喜歡過西方的某些節日。
2.產生這種現象的原因。
3.這種現象可能帶來的影響。
范文
In recent years many Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals . Even some youngsters are paying as great attention to Christmas as our Spring Festival . In addition , other western festivals , like April Fools day and Valentines Day , are very popular among Chinese people .
Many reasons contribute to this pheno-menon . Among them , relaxing and comfortable atmosphere from westem festivals plays a crtitcal role . Moreover , more and more Chinese people begin to leam English , which provides them with more chances to be exposed to westm culture and festivals . Besides , many businessmen desperatcly try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals to attract more customers .
As far as I am concemed , our paying too much attention to western festivals will bring some side effects . The popularity of western festivals to some extent has influence our traditions . Therefore , I suggest that people should not be immersed too much in the western festivals but ingore Chinese traditional festivals .
點評
意為 和 一樣 ， 同級比較。
街接詞語使文章條理清晰、意思連貫。
引出原因常用句式。
which引導非限制性定語從句。
意為 暴露于 。
用于引出個人觀點。
意為 帶來負面影響 。
意為 在某種程度上 。
意為 不是 而是 ，連接并列結構。
意為 過分沉浸在 中 。
五、每日佳作賞析
Directions:For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled . The Celebration of Western Festivals . You shoule write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
1.現在國內有不少人喜歡過西方的某些節日。
2.產生這種現象的原因。
3.這種現象可能帶來的影響。
范文
In recent years many Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals . Even some youngsters are paying as great attention to Christmas as our Spring Festival . In addition , other western festivals , like April Fools day and Valentines Day , are very popular among Chinese people .
Many reasons contribute to this pheno-menon . Among them , relaxing and comfortable atmosphere from westem festivals plays a crtitcal role . Moreover , more and more Chinese people begin to leam English , which provides them with more chances to be exposed to westm culture and festivals . Besides , many businessmen desperatcly try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals to attract more customers .
As far as I am concemed , our paying too much attention to western festivals will bring some side effects . The popularity of western festivals to some extent has influence our traditions . Therefore , I suggest that people should not be immersed too much in the western festivals but ingore Chinese traditional festivals .
點評
意為 和 一樣 ， 同級比較。
街接詞語使文章條理清晰、意思連貫。
引出原因常用句式。
which引導非限制性定語從句。
意為 暴露于 。
用于引出個人觀點。
意為 帶來負面影響 。
意為 在某種程度上 。
意為 不是 而是 ，連接并列結構。
意為 過分沉浸在 中 。
